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Mein Herz BRENNT!!! by Whiluna Mein Herz BRENNT!!! by Whiluna
>>>>>Speedpainting video: [link] <<<<<<

Because cool German dudes ROCK!!!Aww yeah!


Art trade with the awesome =Maniaphobic!

And its her epic character Adolph! <-love this guy so much <3
Gonna spam your inboxes with fan artz of him!!! >:3


I had some problems with the fire...also stupid bandicam turned against me so some parts (shading) is missing from the vid!! Dx I killed myself a bit but now Im fine thanks -.-

Anyways hope you like!


art © guess who?
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:iconnicky-wolf:
Wow I don't even know where to begin with this! This picture truly had me stunned at first.
Vision: Like I said, this picture really made me speechless when I first saw it. I am amazed! The power and emotion in this characters face along with the background sends very powerful and angry emotions coming from the character itself. The stance and the poise along with the emotion all fit together perfectly.
Originality: In terms of originality, I cannot give it a full rating because I have very often seen pictures with a fiery background and a character of any type standing before it with anything from a horrified expression to one of anger or defiance like I am seeing here. The character cannot count because every persons character is unique and is their own. Also because this character is an animal you got points back for that. I am used to seeing people standing before a fire with the look seen here. I am used to seeing animals looking afraid of the fire, I normally don't see animal characters drawn looking brave and defiant in the face of fire.
Technique: The technique used here is fantastic! I watched the speedpaint prior to this and I was very impressed with your skills in the program you used. I like the slight touch of textures used in the rocks he is standing on. Gives it an even more real and 3D touch. The fire too looks very real and 3D. My only complaint however is how the fire was drawn and added. (Warning this next part about the fire may not make much sense DX) The fire itself looks very real but it also looks very placed and almost just looks like a flat image placed behind the character. I think it would have helped if you blended the fire a bit more into the ground as well as maybe making it weave into the trees as well as catching some on fire or making the smolder. Maybe also a steadily thinning stream of fire going way into the background. To me it just looks like the fire is one concentrated cluster and tamed. Fire is wild and uncontrollable so you shouldn't be afraid to let it roam a little free in your drawing! The lighting and shading of this picture is also very nice. One thing I would like to add is the lighting involving the fire. Here it looks like the fire is very close to the dog but you have very little lighting on the outer lines of the dog making it seem like the fire is farther back than what it looks like here. Maybe add a bit more orange to the shading as well as some more intense shadowing to the front of the character farthest away from the fire? Also in terms of shading I really like the contrast and various different tones and shades used in the face! You really captured every wrinkle and the overall snarl on his face very very well. The smoke looks perfect and very real except The placement has me a bit off. Is there more fire in front of the character or is that fog maybe? I think you should have added more smoke coming from the actual fire seen itself. It still looks very nice though (: Also I feel the trees could have used just a tad bit more details. Maybe some texturing there too? Just so they don't look so flat. The anatomy looks great (In my views anyways, I'm definitely no expert on anatomy) And also (this is just my silly personal opinion) maybe add a bit of a glare/shine coming from the dog tags to reflect the light of the fire? That would probably look neat ^u^ (endsillyopinion) Oh wait, Another silly opinion that came to my head is maybe have the character glancing back at the flames they are stopped in front of? Don't get me wrong the, the direct look they are sending straight out of the picture is great! I feel like the character here is looking straight at me. Kind of freaked me out at first ^^;
Impact: I like the intense glow added to the eyes to add to the intensity of the scene itself. It is already very dramatic but the eyes sealed the deal for me! Like I said up at the start, when I clicked on this picture I was left completely speechless and at a loss for words. (if you know me then you would know that is rare for me XD) I was so overcome by the emotions flowing towards me from this single image; it was incredible! I have no complaints whatsoever about the impact. You did a perfect job of nailing the emotion you were trying to capture and it just looks perfect. The defiant stance also makes me appreciate the character. I don't know anything about this dogs personality but I feel like I can get a very clear idea based from this. Great job!

Hope you liked the critique. I feel like I was a bit bossy or judging in the technique section, sorry D:
Once again though, I really adore this picture!
:heart: Dany
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VickyStrife Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NEIN, DEIN HINTERN BRENNT XD Love the title and pic ! Rammstein is the best metal band I know and this song is just... wow. Do you know the piano version of it ? :)
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Coykat Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic!
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IamETOH Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Outstanding job! :iconbravoplz:
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DraconianEmissary Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
You really captured the energy of this song. This amazing piece definitely does it justice. Well done. :)
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ShigureTheProtector Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my god, I freaking LOVE that song!! Really awesome picture! I love the way you did the fire and the dog. Excellent work. :)
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Kekeywolf Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
This is so cool!!!! i love the fire in the back....
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ScottishRedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconla-moxy: Awesome!

I have a German OC :XD:
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012   Digital Artist
Thanks!

Yeah I know xD
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:iconscottishredwolf:
ScottishRedWolf Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem :XD:

Ahh :XD:
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SilverWolf14 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Uwwahh!! So beautiful! The detail is amazing!!
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DeanIsBatman321 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! You know what would be epic?
Is if the little cracks beneath his paws were glowing red or orange; almost like there was lava/fire beneath the ground he is standing on:D
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012   Digital Artist
I was thinking about that but I was afraid it will take away the focus from the dog :D
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DeanIsBatman321 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Understood B-)
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Alanah123 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thats awsome, and im jaleous of the fire (tried some a few days ago and it was awful). i love how the character blends in with the background ^^
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AFrozenHeart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dayum girl, this is really epic:D love coloring, shading.. just everything about this image :la:

just one tip, dont make sharp ending on dogs claws, those are more round on end :D
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Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Digital Artist
Ahh thanks so much Frozy!!!! :la:
Means a lot <3

Yes yes :D
I was totally in a "felin-ish" drawing mood because I was making my "feline poses tut thingy" and I totally forgot about it xD But thanks! ^^
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AFrozenHeart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome as always <333

hehehe, its okay :"D
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Salvarum Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist
inspiration from rammstein?? :DDDDD
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Digital Artist
Kinda :D I thought that song will fit to the video draw ^^
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Salvarum Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist
that`s right :D
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pringlesaddict99 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, you're an amazing artist and dobermans are the best dogs of all time :D :icondobermanplz:
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you so much <3
Yeah! :la:
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DetectiveRJ Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The lighting and the background in this is so so epic. I love it. <3333
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you so much!!! :la:
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GhostRiderWolf Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG OMG OMG EPIC 8D
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LaraDasEngelein Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist
Das ist so toll! Nur funktioniert das Video nicht auf YT....dank GEMA....
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Sie kann nicht so gut deutsch xD
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:iconlaradasengelein:
LaraDasEngelein Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist
oh o_O nicht gesehen XD
Danke für den Hinweis ^^°
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Bitte^^ xD
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Err?
Danke! xD
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:iconlaradasengelein:
LaraDasEngelein Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist
^^ is nicht böse gemeint o__O Das Pic ist wundervoll xD naja eher extrem cool ^^° Schade ist nur das bei mir das Speedpaint nicht geht Q~Q
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Ja ich verstehen! ^^
Oh warum? o.O
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:iconlaradasengelein:
LaraDasEngelein Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist
ähm..do you know GEMA? The blocked videos on youtube. and this is one of them... ^^
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012   Digital Artist
No o.O Well strange...as I noticed only those who are from Germany can´t view the vid...the others can o.O
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:iconlaradasengelein:
LaraDasEngelein Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist
yeah...we in Germany can hardly watch a video on YouTube....thanks to GEMA.
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012   Digital Artist
Oh geez :/
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Ruaya Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uhh, Rammstein?
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Yep :D
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
THIS....THIS....THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING PIECE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3333333333
Love it!!! WHY ARE YOU SO TALENTED AND AMAZING???<333
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Thaaaanks so much Ren! <3333
Because you´re that amazingly talented too <3 x3
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
You're very welcome<3333
Awww thank you so muchh<33333

I can't see the video D:
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Whut why?? D:
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Something with GEMA... The music.. idk xDD i think you have to change the music or something like that.
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Huh? o.O
The others could see it than idk really
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:iconreneah:
Reneah Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
i really don't know anything about youtube's music. xD Which music you are and which music you aren't allowed to use there.
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Hmm wierd o.O

well,I can still send you the vid on skype if you want
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ImIsNika Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh, it`s very, very nice pic..
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GWolfG Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
nice pic... you understand the german text?^^
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:iconwhiluna:
Whiluna Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012   Digital Artist
Thanks!...well,not the whole text but yeah basically I understand whats the song about :D why? ^^
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GWolfG Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
well i kinda know every song of them (not a big surprise) and the most of it is perv xD
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